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Sequencing words, sounds and endings

Week 21 · Unit 9 (B): a fable (reference only), sequencing adverbs, sounds w and wh, word stress with prefixes, a story ending, a short story written in a group, self-assessment · 3 lessons
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A story ending and a story of our own

Connect Primary 6 Term 2, Unit 9: pp. 42–49
GoalWrite an ending with a feeling and a moral, then write a short group story with sequencing adverbs and the past continuous.
New words
ending · the last part of a storyreply · an answer to a messagefeedback · comments to help someone improvenarrator · the voice that tells the storyplan · to decide what to write before you startmoral · the lesson of a story
Explanation

A good ending answers the problem of the story and shows how the characters feel. The book has a story with a reply from a man in another country on pages 38 and 46. Read the page with a grown-up, then plan a different reply. Do not copy any sentences. To write an ending: say what happens last, say how people feel, and add the moral if you want to. Use the past simple and a sequencing adverb such as finally. In the project, three children write one story together. One chooses the setting, one invents the characters and one decides the first event. Use the past continuous for what was happening and the past simple for what happened. Here is our own story, finished with an ending.

PartOur story: ‘The Lost Key’
Settinga busy market in the evening
CharactersLaila and a shop owner
First eventLaila drops her house key
EndingShe finds it and thanks him
MoralLook carefully and ask for help
Worked examples

It was a busy evening in the market. Laila was carrying a bag of oranges when she dropped her house key. First, she looked under the oranges. Next, she looked near the stalls. Then she asked a shop owner for help. After that, they looked together. Finally, the man saw the key under a box. Laila felt very happy and said thank you. She learned to look carefully and to ask for help.

Read and listen to our story.
Look at the picture of the market. Say what was happening: Laila was carrying ...
Read the ending on page 46 of your book. Tell a grown-up how the man feels at the end. Plan a different reply in your own words.
Now you. Work with two friends or family members. Choose a setting, two characters and a first event for a story.
Class activity

Group story. With two others, the child plans a story: setting, characters, narrator and first event. Each person writes three sentences using first, next, then, after that or finally and the past continuous once. Read the story aloud and give each other feedback: one thing you liked and one question. Then write the ending with a feeling and a moral.

Practice
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What do we show in a good ending?
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Which tense do we use for main events in a story?
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Complete: Laila ___ carrying oranges when she dropped her key. (was / were)
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What was the first event in ‘The Lost Key’?
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Writing: write a three-sentence ending for a story about a lost hat. Use finally and a feeling.