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Unit 6 continued: time with friends, a review and a theme

Week 14 · Unit 6 (B) and the sixth chapter of the reader: an article on why spending time with friends matters (reference only), main idea, matching words, an essay about being sociable, how an online review is built (introduction, details, pros and cons, recommendation), a model restaurant review (reference only), a short review with a star rating, reading the sixth chapter of the reader (reference only) · 3 lessons
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Writing a review: structure, opinions and recommendation

English Secondary 3 Term 1, Unit 6 Lesson 5: pp. 93–95
GoalPlan and write a short review with a title, an overall impression, the main aspects with pros and cons, a recommendation and a rating in words.
New words
review · a text that gives an opinion about a place, an event or a thingoverall · when you think about everythingaspect · one part or side of somethingpros and cons · good points and bad pointsrecommend · to say that something is good and that others should try itrating · a mark that shows how good something is
Explanation

A review informs and persuades. It has four parts. 1. A title and an introduction with your overall impression. 2. The main aspects, for example the acting, the costumes and the sound. 3. Your opinion with reasons: pros and cons. 4. A conclusion with a recommendation and a rating written in words (four stars out of five; never use a symbol). Useful phrases: Overall, I really enjoyed …; The best thing about … was …; However, …; Although …; On the one hand … on the other hand …; I would (not) recommend it to …. Review things, places and events (a school canteen, a class trip, a book, a school play), never a named person. The book’s model on page 94 is named by page only; its task (page 95) asks for 60 to 80 words; ours is 70 to 90 (up to 120 if you can).

PartWhat to writeUseful phrases
title and introductionthe subject and your overall impressionOverall, I really enjoyed …
main aspectstwo or three things, with reasonsThe best thing about … was …
pros and consone good and one weak pointHowever, … / Although …
conclusionrecommendation and ratingI would recommend it to … Rating: four stars out of five.
Worked examples

Overall, I really enjoyed this year’s school play, a funny story about a lost school bell. The acting was the best part: the lead actor spoke clearly, and the group scenes were lively. The costumes were simple but clever. However, the sound was too quiet at the back, and the second half felt a little long. Although it was not perfect, the best thing about the evening was the teamwork. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys comedy. Rating: four stars out of five.

Read our model review. A grown-up can read it aloud first.
Count: the model has 85 words, inside the 70 to 90 limit. The first sentence gives the overall impression; the next two sentences give the aspects; the last two give the opinion and the recommendation.
Balance: the writer says what was good (the acting, the costumes) and what was weak (the sound, the long second half). This makes the review fair and believable.
Rating in words: “Rating: four stars out of five.” We write the words and do not draw symbols.
Class activity

Write your own review of 70 to 90 words (up to 120) of a school canteen, a class trip or a book. Use a title, an overall impression, two aspects, one weakness, a recommendation and a rating in words. Do not name a person.

Practice
1
Which part of a review gives the final advice?
2
Which word introduces a weak point after a good point?
3
Write a rating of three out of five in words.
4
Which is a good subject for a class review: a named classmate or a school play?
5
Complete the opinion phrase: “The best ___ about the trip was the picnic.”