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My dream job: a review

الأسبوع 12 · الوحدة 5 (ب): فصل من قصة (للقراءة في الكتاب فقط) والهدف والأمل وكتابة مراجعة عن وظيفة الأحلام وعلامة الحذف العليا وخريطة ذهنية لوظيفة الأحلام ومراجعة الوحدة · 3 دروس
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My dream job: a review with apostrophes

English Preparatory 1 Term 1, Unit 5: pp. 80–86
GoalWrite a review of a dream job with good and hard sides, and use apostrophes for possession and contractions.
New words
review · a text that says what you think about somethinggood side · a positive pointhard side · a difficult pointapostrophe · the sign ’ in words like I’m and Hagar’scontraction · a short form such as don’topinion · what you think
Explanation

A review gives your opinion. First say what you are reviewing, then the good side, the hard side, and what you think. Opinion words: great, important, difficult, boring, exciting, useful. Join ideas with because, but and however: The job is hard, but I love it. I like it. However, the hours are long. Add a plan with going to: I’m going to study at university. Apostrophes: use ’ to show that letters are missing in a contraction: I am becomes I’m, do not becomes don’t, it is becomes it’s. Use ’ also to show who something belongs to: Hagar’s book (one girl), the girls’ bags (many girls). Write 60 to 80 words, or up to 100 if you can.

Use of ’Example
missing lettersI’m, don’t, it’s, she’ll
one ownerHagar’s book, the teacher’s desk
many ownersthe girls’ bags, the students’ pens
Worked examples

I think being a librarian is a great job. The good side is that you are with books all day, and you help people find stories. The hard side is that you must keep the library quiet and tidy. I’m going to study at university and read a lot. I don’t want to be famous; I want to help readers. A librarian’s work is important, so it’s a job I’m going to enjoy.

Read and listen to a model review.
PartExample
OpinionI think being a librarian is a great job.
Good sideYou are with books all day.
Hard sideYou must keep the library quiet.
PlanI’m going to study at university.
Structure of a review.
Yasmin

Is it Hoda book or Hoda’s book?

Dina

It’s Hoda’s book. The ’s shows it belongs to Hoda.

Listen. Two friends talk about an apostrophe.
Now you. Tell a grown-up one good side and one hard side of a job you like.
Class activity

Review plan. Choose a job (baker, farmer, teacher, mechanic). Fold a paper in four: opinion, good side, hard side, my plan. Write a sentence in each part. Then write the review in 60 to 80 words. Check the apostrophes.

Practice
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Write the short form: I am, do not, it is.
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Add an apostrophe: Hagars book is on the table.
3
Add an apostrophe: The girls bags are in the classroom.
4
Join with however: The job is hard. I love it.
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Writing: write a review (60 to 80 words, up to 100 if you can) of a job you like. Say the good side, the hard side and your plan.