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Review 2 and Term 1 round-up

Week 15 · Review 2 (Units 4–6 and the novel) and the Term 1 review: vocabulary in context, verb patterns, quantifiers, articles, a translation check, a reading text about a company, email and CV questions, a writing task, three questions on the story, and a look back at the whole term · 3 lessons
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Review 2: translation, reading, writing and the story

English Secondary 1 Term 1, Review 2, Translation, Reading, Writing and Novel: pp. 96–99
GoalRead a new text, paraphrase ideas, choose formal or informal language, write a short answer and answer a question about a story.
New words
innovative · new and cleverversion · one form of something that changes over timedesign · to plan and make the shape of somethingneed · something you must haveparaphrase · to say the same idea in different wordsagree · to have the same opinion
Explanation

A review reading lesson uses all your skills. Read the title and the questions first, then the text. Detail questions need a sentence from the text. Reference questions ask what a word such as it, they or this points to: look back for the noun that fits. For a paraphrase, change words and order and keep all the facts. Choose formal or informal language for the reader: a teacher or a librarian needs formal language, a friend can have informal language. Short writing tasks of 60 to 80 words need a plan: topic sentence, two details, closing sentence. For a story question, ask: Where and when? What does the character want? What stops him? What is the turning point? What is the theme? In your book, Review 2 has translation sentences and a company text; here we practise the same skills in English only, with new texts.

TaskQuick method
DetailFind the sentence
ReferenceLook back for the noun that fits
ParaphraseNew words, same facts
RegisterReader decides: teacher = formal, friend = informal
Worked examples

The Robotics Club of our school meets on Wednesdays. Last term the members decided to solve a small problem: many pens and pencils were left in classrooms and lost. Eight students designed a box on wheels that moves slowly along the corridor and collects them. It took them six weeks, and the first version did not work because the wheels were too small. They kept trying, and the second version carried the pens to the office without any help. Teachers say that the idea is innovative because it started with a real need. Next term the club wants to share its plan with other schools, if the head teacher agrees.

Read the text. A grown-up can read it aloud first.
Detail: eight students designed the box; it took six weeks; the first version failed because the wheels were too small. Reference: in “carried the pens to the office”, the second version refers to the box on wheels.
Paraphrase: “They kept trying” can be rewritten as “They did not give up.” Both sentences say that the students continued after the first failure.
Register: a message to the head teacher asking permission should be formal (I am writing to ask whether we may share our plan). A message to a friend about the club can be informal (Guess what! Our robot works!).
Class activity

Review writing. Write 60 to 80 words about a small problem in your school and how a club could solve it. Use a first conditional (If the club builds …, it will …) and one verb followed by to. Then write the first sentence of a formal email to the head teacher about it.

Practice
1
How many students designed the box, and how long did it take?
2
Why did the first version not work?
3
Paraphrase: “Teachers say that the idea is innovative.”
4
Which message is formal? (a) Hey! Can we use the hall on Friday? (b) I would be grateful if we could use the hall on Friday.
5
Story question: “Her hands shook and she looked at the floor.” How does she feel and how do we know?