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Unit 5 Using Technology at Schools: feelings, informal emails and turning points

Week 12 · Unit 5 Using Technology at Schools (B) and Chapter 5 of the novel: a story-like text about a traveller who cannot speak the language (reference only), anxious / complicated / confident / enriching, an essay on being multilingual, the informal email, Chapter 5 of the novel (reference only) · 3 lessons
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Writing an informal email

English Secondary 1 Term 1, Unit 5 Lesson 5: p. 79
GoalWrite an informal email to a friend and tell formal language from informal language.
New words
informal · relaxed and friendly, used with friendscontraction · a short form such as I’d or don’tinvitation · a request to come to an eventexclamation · a short, strong sentence ending with !reply · to answer a messagefair · an event with many stalls and activities
Explanation

An informal email is friendly and personal. Use a friendly subject (Book fair on Saturday!), begin with Hi and the name, and write as you speak. Contractions are normal: I’d, we’re, can’t. You can use short phrases such as Guess what!, I just wanted to tell you that … and I’d love you to come. Ask questions to the reader: Can you make it? End with a warm closing such as See you soon! or Write back soon, and your first name. Formal and informal differ in register. Formal: I would be grateful if you could attend. Informal: I’d love you to come. Do not use slang that the reader may not know, and do not write in capital letters only. Check that the email has a greeting, a purpose, the details (what, when, where) and a friendly ending.

PartInformal example
SubjectBook fair on Saturday!
GreetingHi Hend,
PurposeI just wanted to ask if you’d like to come.
ClosingSee you soon! Rana
Worked examples

Subject: Book fair on Saturday! Hi Hend, Guess what! Our school is holding a book fair this Saturday from ten o’clock in the yard, and I’d love you to come. There will be a lot of stalls, and my class is selling used books for very low prices. I’m also going to read one of my own short stories. Can you make it? We could have lunch in the canteen afterwards. Write back soon! See you on Saturday, Rana

Read the model email.
Informal features: Hi, Guess what!, I’d love you to come, contractions (I’d, I’m), a question to the reader and See you on Saturday.
Formal or informal? “I am writing to invite you to attend the school book fair” is formal. “Guess what! I’d love you to come to our book fair” is informal.
Details check: what (a book fair), when (Saturday from ten o’clock), where (the school yard). A good invitation always gives the what, when and where.
Class activity

Invite a friend. Write an informal email of 60 to 80 words inviting a friend to a school book fair or a family meal. Include a friendly subject, Hi, Guess what!, the what, when and where, a question and a friendly ending. Read it to a grown-up and check that it sounds friendly.

Practice
1
Which greeting is informal? (a) Dear Ms Hend, (b) Hi Hend, (c) To whom it may concern
2
Rewrite in an informal way: “I would be pleased if you could attend my birthday party.”
3
Which closing is informal? (a) Yours sincerely (b) See you soon! (c) With respect
4
Which details must an invitation have?
5
Write a friendly question to finish an invitation email.