Writing an argumentative essay: claim, reasons and the other side
An argumentative essay has five parts. The introduction states your claim in one sentence. Two body paragraphs give one reason each, with an example or a school fact that you can explain. The next part shows the opposing view and answers it politely. The conclusion repeats the claim in new words. Use phrases for each job: In my opinion and I believe that state a claim; firstly, secondly, because and for example support it; however and on the other hand introduce the other side; in conclusion and to sum up end the essay. Be fair: attack the idea, never the person, and use examples from school life, not numbers that you cannot check. You can use reported speech to show the other side: Some people say that students will bring snacks. For this lesson write 70 to 90 words. Your book has a draft essay on page 34 with its paragraphs out of order, and a task of 180 to 200 words on page 35; our frame will help you to plan it.
| Part | Useful phrases | Example from our model |
|---|---|---|
| Introduction with claim | In my opinion … / I believe that … | In my opinion, it should. |
| Reasons | Firstly … Secondly … because … for example | Firstly, fried snacks make many students sleepy. |
| Opposing view | However, some people say that … | However, some people say that students will bring snacks. |
| Conclusion | In conclusion … / To sum up … | In conclusion, the canteen should choose healthier food. |
Should the school canteen stop selling fried snacks? In my opinion, it should, because healthy food helps students to think. Firstly, fried snacks make many students sleepy after break. For example, our class finds it hard to concentrate in the last lesson. Secondly, the canteen can sell fruit and sandwiches at the same price. However, some people say that students will bring snacks from outside. This may be true, but a clear rule can help. In conclusion, the canteen should choose healthier food.
Your essay. Write 70 to 90 words: Should there be no homework on weekends? State your claim, give two reasons with an example, show the other side with However and finish with In conclusion. Underline the linking words. If you can, write up to 120 words.